Aghast, I
stared at the approaching wave of sand. It stood about fifteen meters high and
it rushed towards at an alarming speed. Dread seeped into our very muscles and
forbade us to move. For a few long moments we stood there our mouths agape.
Then; “Run for your lives!” Zack shouted as he turned his horse and galloped
away, seemingly at the speed of light. Regaining our senses we followed in his
stead.
I dug my
heels in my horse’s ribs, it galloped as fast as it probably could, but the
sand was a terrible enemy. Soon my horse was knee-deep in the sand, struggling
against nature. I pulled at its reins, trying to help it. The storm was almost
upon us, my heart raced franticly and just as my horse broke free of the sand,
the storm pounced on us and folded us into its self. I tensed, but knowing that
tension would only make things worse, I tried to calm myself, to no avail.
I looked
around me, squinting. It was if I had entered a world made entirely of powdered
gold. The swirling sand roared in my ears and the wind whipped my hair in my
face. Everything moved in such fast a motion that it made me dizzy. Soon I had
to shut my eyes and my mouth due to the excessive sand. I held onto my horse’s
reins as the tiny particles of sand stung and stuck to my sweaty skin. I felt
my horse rear beneath me, and I fell off it as it mercilessly galloped away. I
listened to the muffled sound of its hooves, realizing how very alone I was. I
strained my ears, trying to listen for my companions. But all I heard was the
distant braying of a few horses through the thundering storm. However, my
optimism allowed me to think that my companions had somehow survived. After
all, miracles did happen in this world.
I did not
dare open my eyes or my mouth neither did I dare to stand up. Incompetent
against the storm I sat there, thinking. I thought back to how I had ended up
here, and for a terrifying moment, I could not remember. But then miracles did
happen in this world and a miracle it was that I was able to remember my
journey.
We were on a
trading journey to Arabia from Jordan. The odds had not been in our favour
since the very beginning. Firstly the weather was not good, the winds were
pretty harsh. Then midway to Arabia our lot was looted by our thieves, and all
our trading material was lost. Not knowing what to do, we had turned back
towards Jordan. No sooner had we turned around that we saw the approaching wave
of sand in which we were stuck now.
All these
thoughts occupied my head and all the sand occupied my nose. Two tears leaked
through each of my closed eyelids and stung my face as they traveled down. I
was going to die and I was helpless and alone in this time of great need. I
tried to shut out the noise of the raging storms both within and without of me.
I prayed to God for help. ‘I do not want to die right now’, I explained to Him
‘I had so much to do, so much to live for!’
And what
happened next was indescribable; I can only say I survived, and as I began my
solo journey back to Jordon I could only think that after all, miracles do
happen in this world.
This is an amazing story. It's so much better than my story about the sea storm. Are you still taking English tuitions?
ReplyDeleteKeep posting more writings!
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DeleteThanks Fatima, yes I am still taking tuition. I'll view your blog right away!
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome! Please do cast your vote in the poll on the left-hand side of my blog. :)
DeleteThis story is just so wonderfully written! :D I love the descriptions so much - I can picture the scene so well!
ReplyDeleteDo continue writing more great stories like this! ^^
Thanks Kenza!
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